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Invitation wording? - invitation wording
I went and the wording of the invitation (I myself am) pressure, and I wonder whether people can improve it for me! This is a small wedding, so we say "intimate".
Two lives, two hearts
in friendship
United Forever in love.
Together with their parents
Brides name
and
Grooms First Middle Last
We invite you to join them for a
Intimate celebration of love, because
Exchange vows
On Saturday, the eleventh day of August
two thousand and seven
half past ten
Ceremony Venue
Address
City, State
Lunch Home
Immediately after the ceremony
One question I have is what people think of division? I think what I can do, but I have to change, where the square is the square before the ceremony that? When he held prior to the date?
Thank you! :)
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14 comments:
Sounds good, you have a good job! I made it. I checked the website of the invitation styles and spaces. So I looked, and how far between. Note that centered, so it is much better:) We had our own wedding, so that the parents have not followed our invitation included. Plus, we were 50 and 52 at our wedding! Hope this helps!
Bride's Name
and
Married name
will be honored if you shares
Beginning of our new life together
the exchange of marriage vows
Saturday, January the twenty-eighth
two thousand and six
to eighteen hours
The reef
880 South Harbor Scenic Drive
Long Beach, California
Reception after the ceremony
exchange their vows of love and marriage.
The distance is good. No RSVP. Only in the middle of writing on paper and everything looks good.
Congratulations.
I think the way they were written, and space are suitable.
I think the way they were written, and space are suitable.
I think the way they were written, and space are suitable.
I think the way they were written, and space are suitable.
I think the way they were written, and space are suitable.
I think the way they were written, and space are suitable.
Okay.
Is perfect, this is very good with all the information where it is done. Congratulations!
I'm an editor, if you can help
1. Put "and" before "union" in line 3
2. Put "in" before "Saturday"
3. "In ten or thirty in the morning" should read "half in ten clock in the morning" for a formal invitation.
Remove the space before the ceremony information. Thus the invitation into three sections: The first sentence plan that is broken the sound, the details of the wedding and reception information sets. Also, a small cap or a modern source of the text on the invitation, unless your name and the name of her friend, who can be great in italics, that apart from the rest of the information taken into account.
This is a lunch reception at the same place as the church? If so, to what extent it was written. If nothing else, then you need a separate reception card.
EDIT: formal wedding invitations have a comma at the end of the lines as you read it if you start a paragraph format.
You need to delete the word "intimate" Regardless of why it's there. The room is very good. Lunch Menu information about the angle at the bottom left of the color
Here are my suggestions:
1) Insert a comma after "Together with their parents"
2) "Two thousand seven" (delete "and")
3) Can I focus on the words on the page?
It looks good otherwise. Have a good life!
Here are my suggestions:
1) Insert a comma after "Together with their parents"
2) "Two thousand seven" (delete "and")
3) Can I focus on the words on the page?
It looks good otherwise. Have a good life!
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